I liked it. It had a good overtone but it's too loopy in the beginning.
I don't know why, but it kinda drove out of the rhyme at about 1:20
I liked it. It had a good overtone but it's too loopy in the beginning.
I don't know why, but it kinda drove out of the rhyme at about 1:20
Yeah, the beginning melody didn't have much variation to be honest. Neither did the main melody. I have an idea for another song which well hopefully have more variation in melody.
Thanks for the review! ^~^
great work larry!
Thanks, ComicD! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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